For Hayat's blog "The Lovely Bones"

I think that this could become an allstar blog, you just need to do a couple of things to improve it:
- First you have to write more details of the book and retell the story a little so that a reader that isnt familiar with the book, can get an idea of the plot and what the problems and plot is.
- I also think that you could make it much longer because all you have is the basic information and if someone who didnt know the book (like me) read it they wouldnt understand anything.  I find that blogposts are supposed to give an idea to an interested reader about a book, and it has to convince them that the book is worth reading.  So if your post was longer there would be more information to convince the reader to read the book.
- You also need to go outside the book and how it relates to the real world.  You do that a bit but its just the basics.  You need to really just put it all out there.
- Another thing you have to do is explain the effect that the book had on you, and the emotions you felt while reading it.  You also cant only write about the book, you also have to write about your opinion on the story and how the book may have changed you.
- Lastly i think that it is odd that you said that you have been thinking about the book for a long time but you didnt really explain what you were thinking about. And also write about the positive and negative about the book.